Most web comics I have read
the first 5 pages of gain traction quickly, like: "Here is the depressed/nakama-obsessed protagonist and his friends, now watch as they fight against the mafia the very next page." Understandable, really.
Meanwhile, here we are. The protagonists have not even been mentioned yet. We are 12 pages in. This is concerning.
Also, those are some, erm, interesting proportions.